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一段旅游景点介绍, 英译后寡然如水. 限于水平, 最精彩的第二段基本上没能翻译出来. 请高手帮助修改英译文. 谢谢大家.

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金华双龙洞距金华市区约15公里，坐落在海拔1000多米的北山南坡，除底层的双龙洞之外，还有中层的冰壶洞和最高的朝真洞。双龙洞分内、外两洞，外洞高大明亮，洞高66余米，广、深各33余米，面积1200多平方米。洞内陈放着一排排石桌、石椅，可容千人品茶避暑。
双龙洞最奇趣的是外洞与内洞之间，有一块巨大的岩石覆盖在一流清泉之上，水道宽丈余，岩底仅离水面一尺左右，进出里洞，只得用小船，人直躺在船底，小船从岩底的水面穿引而入，当穿到岩底中间时眼前一片漆黑，似乎周围的岩石一齐朝身上挤压过来，岩石几乎擦着鼻子。进约二三丈，又豁然开朗，被誉为奇观。
内洞约有2000多平方米，岩洞深邃。在小船上岸处，抬头仰望，有一条青色钟乳岩纹自东北洞顶蜿蜒而来，另有一条黄色钟乳石自西北俯冲而至，人们称为“双龙”，龙状清晰可辨，形象逼真。洞内钟乳、石笋奇形怪状，纵横交错。

THE DOUBLE-DRAGON CAVE IN JINHUA
The Double-Dragon Cave scenic spot is only 15 km away from urban Jinhua. The scenic spot is divided into three major caves: Double-dragon Cave, Binghu Cave (also Ice Kettle Cave), and Chaozhen Cave (also Worshiping Goddess of Mercy Cave). Among them, the Double-dragon Cave is the largest and the most magnificent. There is an inner cave and an outer cave in the Double-dragon Cave. The outer cave is 66-meter in height and covers an area of 1,200 sq m. The inner cave covers an area of 2,000 sq m. Between the inner and outer caves, there is a subterranean river under a giant rock, which is the only potential way leading to the inner cave. If one wants to go the inner cave, he (she) should lie on a small boat towed by workers. And inside the inner cave, there is a dragon-shaped blue stalactite and a dragon-shaped yellow stalactite meander from northeast and northwest, which are called by the local people as "double dragons", and the cave is named after the two "dragons".

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• Well done! And a terrific tourist attraction, too! One minor change... - Owen 20001208075102
• Your English is good! FYR, here's a re-arranged version based on yours: - 野草 20001208141622
  • 现在译文象样多了 - DPSS 20001208184910
• 低手冒充高手，也来说两句。 - Last Hermit 20001209111559

Well done! And a terrific tourist attraction, too! One minor change...

Your English is good! FYR, here's a re-arranged version based on yours:

现在译文象样多了

低手冒充高手，也来说两句。