读书评译 (65):还是结构
...and modern philosophy has conceived the idea of humanity as wrought upon by, and summing up in itself, all modes of thought and life. (W. Pater: The Mona Lisa)
而现代哲学业已构想出人性这一理念,这是多样的思维与生活所造就,同时也是其本身内涵的概括归纳。(《英国散文小书屋》,122-123页)
评:分词短语 wrought upon by 的介词by和另一分词短语 summing up in itself,有一个共同的宾语:all modes of thought and life。但译文将“其自身内涵”视为第二个分词“概括归纳”的宾语。