Seeking kind help

黄鹤楼送孟浩然之广陵①
A friend of mine (American) was given a piece of calligraphic art with the following poem. Since he does not understand Chinese, so he asked me to translate this for him. I think my translation was too humble , did not convey the spirit of this beautiful poem, so I am asking if anyone has an English version of this poem. Thanks a lot in advance.

【唐】李白

故人西辞黄鹤楼，
烟花三月下扬州。
孤帆远影碧空尽，
惟见长江天际流。

Here is my translation for you to comment on:

An old friend of mine departing the Yellow Crane Pavilion
is bound for the West,
to Yangzhou City in this blossoming March.

The lonely sail in its distant silhouette disappears into the clear blue sky,
leaving visible only the Yangtze River running to the horizon.

This is not a poem, rather, it's just a plain text. What a shame!　

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• Good translation! Quite effective English that demands not corrections but some possible suggestions - tian xin 20000321041020
• Aha! I am home-sick. I miss the Yanzse River. Thank you both. - learner 20000321080716
• 方向？ - px 20000321083929
  • You are right. - 旁观 20000321163948
  • Thanks for pointing out the right direction. Should be - tian xin 20000321172225
• Another try - 方壶斋 20000321203637
• 发挥各位优势?:-) - 强强合作 20000322063442

Good translation! Quite effective English that demands not corrections but some possible suggestions

Aha! I am home-sick. I miss the Yanzse River. Thank you both.

方向？

You are right.

Thanks for pointing out the right direction. Should be

Another try

发挥各位优势?:-)