To Hanying on her second birthday: a neutral greeting

The minute I heard you had been born
my hour was no longer time-chained or forlorn
My sky swelled with many a celestial sound
to resonate with a rare joy on earth found
My night walked forth in bridal grace
to adorn a bilingual star of the fairest race
whose light into my dreams softly flowed
towards whose dawn my dreamer shyly rode

Knock knock..

Awake thou morning divine
unveil thy glory to my muses nine
Awake ye friends of mine
come share my birthday wine
hold my hands, take my line:
get high and s-h-i-n-e!

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• 恭祝汉英论坛创办两周年！ - 慧芸 20000417081344
  • 恭贺汉英论坛创办两周年！Wishing you many future successes!/ - Cheyenne 20000417084121
  • 给汉英的生日礼物--歌剧名段中译 - 歪 20000417235632
    • 好久不见，歪兄墨香依旧！问好！并向汉英衷心祝贺！！ - 正 20000418005919
      • 借助歪君译诗的文采，来个自由化，试试白话文的表现力。 - 北美 20000418082122
        • 迟到的祝贺 - XY 20000418094925
      • 向正兄问过好！谢北美和XY两位的佳译！也谢pedant的指正！ - 歪 20000418104946
        • 嘿嘿，此地的缪斯还真不少于九位呢！看来重在发现自我！ - 乐乐 20000418111345
          • 嘿嘿，那还不是因为有了汉英！谢汉英！ - xy 20000418121837
    • Yummy! 好一个“欢乐若重汇，千金不足悔”! - pedant 20000418012129
• 不知不觉两年过去了。多谢大家的支持和鼓励！ - 汉英 20000417083816
  • 愿汉英花园四季常春！ - 鹤子 20000417103050
    • 四月的天是晴朗的天，四月的人民好疯癫 - clown 20000417182340
      • Then, peace be with the mad ones :-) - hz 20000417222552
      • 四月的天是“明朗”的天，四月的“网民”好喜欢， - xy 20000418123435
    • 非常喜欢 - XY 20000418101316
      • I'm glad. Thanks! - hz 20000418111251
  • 多谢汉英。。。 - 渔夫 20000417140107
    • 是税婆还是渔婆？ - clown 20000417173539
      • 嘘！小声点。不要害我饿饭。 - 渔夫 20000417194312
        • 哈哈哈。那您就学学zy用情专一：拿汉语当家汉英当伴，汉英当床汉英当书店，汉英当葱花汉英当荷包蛋。。算了:) - clown 20000417225150
    • 渔老师，您还是把船撑回这边来吧，这儿不用交税哦！ - Last Hermit 20000417230337
      • 谢谢隐士君。请千万不要再称“师”字。有友如隐士君者，三生有幸也。 - 渔夫 20000418230221
        • Shi! - Last Hermit 20000419051731
  • hanying is my desk, my paper, my phone, my chair, my post office... - zy 20000417164529
    • as well as my book, my teacher, and my dictionary.....of course! - zy 20000417165739
      • anything missing ;) - clown 20000417183617
        • yeah, the most important..... my bar, and... my liquor store! my Bub Mall... - zy 20000418004006
  • OK, Let's cut the cake and eat ! - The Yeti 20000417164912
    • 雅蜜！！！ - x 20000417170234
      • 借您的地方，呼一下PX妹妹：生日PARTY你躲到哪里去了？ - xy 20000418122458
        • 人家早就把Bitware of the cake分走了。迟到的是您！ - 乐乐 20000418135935
        • 我在这儿！ - px 20000418190619
          • Hey 自己人！ - t x 20000418195634
            • Thanks for your responses! - px 20000419055358
              • 再自己人一回 - tian xin 20000420203930
          • Greetings, great ballerina and my great collaborator! :-))) - hz 20000418223807
            • Thanks for your encouragement! - px 20000419055803
              • Haha... - hz 20000419072843
                • 答疑解难 - xy 20000419094826
                  • Thanks, sis! :-) - hz 20000419103126
                  • 无功受禄？ - px 20000419104700
        • Since you are late for the cake, I leave you some champaign.(Go back and look at the cake picture again.) - The Yeti 20000418203249
    • 亲爱的雪公公：Can I have your champagne and drink it, too? - clown 20000418230331
      • Sure, cheers. Bottoms up. - The Yeti 20000419131110
        • And "have my cake and eat it" too? ;) - clown 20000419180128
          • Sure, if you can make a clone of the cake ! - The Yeti 20000419221706
• 祝愿汉英论坛越办越红火，吸引天下更多英汉双语翻译发烧友！ - 野草 20000417091734
  • 唱支心中的歌给汉英：“站在世界之巅” - 野草 20000417151006
    • 报名:-) 谢谢您分享这么赏心悦耳的译歌！ - 鹤子 20000417155724
    • 草音悦耳，沁入我心田。谢谢三位佳译。 - tian xin 20000417183141
    • 欣赏野草君的文采和真诚，文如其人！ - 伊妹 20000417212356
      • 您说出了我的心里话，我就不重复了:-) - XY 20000418100258
    • 对不起，打漏了重要的一行：“感受到你的爱”，补正！ - 野草 20000417224554
• 不见文，重贴。 - 野草 20000417092014
  • 谢野草佳译。正好年轻时会唱这支歌...屋里没人时就清唱了两遍！ - 北美 20000418125710
• 生日快乐！ - Bitware 20000417092720
  • 戏出于懒而胜于蓝。Thank you, my museware! - tian xin 20000417175402
    • 出于。。。 - Bitware 20000417185251
      • haha.. - tian xin 20000417190448
• 本来要将Virginia Woolf的《飞蛾之死》赶译出来，送给汉英作生日礼物的…… - Last Hermit 20000417124826
  • It's never too late to mend "a Virginia fence" ;) Looking forward to it. - tian xin 20000418021348
• Congrats, Hy00! - laoliu 20000417145324
  • There must be a special meaning in "follow-upping" instead of "following-up." What IS it? - curious 20000417231025
    • 没有，找不到好词，就乱讲了几个。:-) - laoliu 20000418130627
      • Interesting! Thanks! - curious 20000418140628
• 戏译 - XY 20000418111455
  • 译得很顺，很美。有一个愚蠢然而又是真实的问题： - 北美 20000418130226
    • But isn't each day a celebration of union when the dawn is sealed by a kiss of the sun? - tian xin 20000418163611
      • In that case, on behalf of all the women with the poetic mind (like yours), let's say: - bm 20000419124221
        • But your name would only be interpreted as BridesMaid:-))) - xy 20000419131504
  • My lips grew sweet reading your words. 谢谢家长:) - tian xin 20000418162850
    • My Heart grew sweet reading Your words:-) - xy 20000418165843

恭祝汉英论坛创办两周年！

恭贺汉英论坛创办两周年！Wishing you many future successes!/

给汉英的生日礼物--歌剧名段中译

好久不见，歪兄墨香依旧！问好！并向汉英衷心祝贺！！

借助歪君译诗的文采，来个自由化，试试白话文的表现力。

迟到的祝贺

向正兄问过好！谢北美和XY两位的佳译！也谢pedant的指正！

嘿嘿，此地的缪斯还真不少于九位呢！看来重在发现自我！

嘿嘿，那还不是因为有了汉英！谢汉英！

Yummy! 好一个“欢乐若重汇，千金不足悔”!

不知不觉两年过去了。多谢大家的支持和鼓励！

愿汉英花园四季常春！

四月的天是晴朗的天，四月的人民好疯癫

Then, peace be with the mad ones :-)

四月的天是“明朗”的天，四月的“网民”好喜欢，

非常喜欢

I'm glad. Thanks!

多谢汉英。。。

是税婆还是渔婆？

嘘！小声点。不要害我饿饭。

哈哈哈。那您就学学zy用情专一：拿汉语当家汉英当伴，汉英当床汉英当书店，汉英当葱花汉英当荷包蛋。。算了:)

渔老师，您还是把船撑回这边来吧，这儿不用交税哦！

谢谢隐士君。请千万不要再称“师”字。有友如隐士君者，三生有幸也。

Shi!

hy00 is my desk, my paper, my phone, my chair, my post office...

as well as my book, my teacher, and my dictionary.....of course!

anything missing ;)

yeah, the most important..... my bar, and... my liquor store! my Bub Mall...

OK, Let's cut the cake and eat !

雅蜜！！！

借您的地方，呼一下PX妹妹：生日PARTY你躲到哪里去了？

人家早就把Bitware of the cake分走了。迟到的是您！

我在这儿！

Hey 自己人！

Thanks for your responses!

再自己人一回

Greetings, great ballerina and my great collaborator! :-)))

Thanks for your encouragement!

Haha...

答疑解难

Thanks, sis! :-)

无功受禄？

Since you are late for the cake, I leave you some champaign.(Go back and look at the cake picture again.)

亲爱的雪公公：Can I have your champagne and drink it, too?

Sure, cheers. Bottoms up.

And "have my cake and eat it" too? ;)

Sure, if you can make a clone of the cake !

祝愿汉英论坛越办越红火，吸引天下更多英汉双语翻译发烧友！

唱支心中的歌给汉英：“站在世界之巅”

报名:-) 谢谢您分享这么赏心悦耳的译歌！

草音悦耳，沁入我心田。谢谢三位佳译。

欣赏野草君的文采和真诚，文如其人！

您说出了我的心里话，我就不重复了:-)

对不起，打漏了重要的一行：“感受到你的爱”，补正！

不见文，重贴。

谢野草佳译。正好年轻时会唱这支歌...屋里没人时就清唱了两遍！

生日快乐！

戏出于懒而胜于蓝。Thank you, my museware!

出于。。。

haha..

本来要将Virginia Woolf的《飞蛾之死》赶译出来，送给汉英作生日礼物的……

It's never too late to mend "a Virginia fence" ;) Looking forward to it.

Congrats, Hy00!

There must be a special meaning in "follow-upping" instead of "following-up." What IS it?

没有，找不到好词，就乱讲了几个。:-)

Interesting! Thanks!

戏译

译得很顺，很美。有一个愚蠢然而又是真实的问题：

But isn't each day a celebration of union when the dawn is sealed by a kiss of the sun?

In that case, on behalf of all the women with the poetic mind (like yours), let's say:

But your name would only be interpreted as BridesMaid:-)))

My lips grew sweet reading your words. 谢谢家长:)

My Heart grew sweet reading Your words:-)