人约黄昏后

生查子·元夕

作者：朱淑真

　　　　去年元夜时，花市灯如昼。
　　　　月上柳梢头，人约黄昏后。
　　　　今年元夜时，月与灯依旧。
　　　　不见去年人，泪湿春衫袖。

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    • 妙改！谢谢！ - 古月 20000617191713
      • Thanks. Manly tears they, too, could be/Though not shed till one faces the Yellow river or blue sea - tian xin 20000617194434
        • Much as men do shed tears/Hardly ever will they flood your ears. - 古月 20000618000733
          • 谢谢您的翻译和俏皮话/ - 周末歌手 20000618011421
  • Terrific! Now I see the best policy to have a terrific version like that from Gu Yue, - XY 20000618125940
    • I know it's not that good but I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your compliment! - 古月 20000618154839

为不负双语论坛的名声，也代您试译成英文吧：生查子·元夕

好译！能否在性别上朦胧一下，蒙蒙老外

妙改！谢谢！

Thanks. Manly tears they, too, could be/Though not shed till one faces the Yellow river or blue sea

Much as men do shed tears/Hardly ever will they flood your ears.

谢谢您的翻译和俏皮话/

Terrific! Now I see the best policy to have a terrific version like that from Gu Yue,

I know it's not that good but I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your compliment!