周末随哈代兄戏说冤家一笑：-)

冤家
(哈代原作)

那会我心一横非要查个水落石出 -
看哪个妖精的像片他会看了又看再一声叹息；
他人死了我才为这事儿痛哭流涕
咒自己卑鄙犯贱我后悔莫及！

趁他不在我搜他抽屉，
像片翻到啦 - 可不就是我自己！
像片里我当年象天仙最美丽
是哪天拍的却完全没标记。

瞧自己那模样我乐开了花，含笑忙把像放回去，
他那德性还一个劲儿对着像片痴心哩，直到
我发现，他爱的不是活生生的我，
原来他还在恋着那八辈子前的女人哩，
把老娘我气得呀，真是岂有此理！

唉，我恨，我气，一肚子醋意，
当下把过去的我呀，三下五除二撕了扔垃圾；
列位看官恐怕做梦也没想到，
女人心里做事，竟会如此傻不喇叽！

The Rival
(By Thomas Hardy)

I determined to find out whose it was *C
The portrait he looked at so, and sighed;
Bitterly have I rued my meanness
And wept for it since he died!

I searched his desk when he was away,
And there was the likeness *C yes, my own!
Taken when I was the season’s fairest,
And time-lines all unknown.

I smiled at my image, and put it back,
And he went on cherishing it, until
I was chafed that he loved not the me then living.
But that past woman still.

Well, such was my jealousy at last,
I destroyed that face of the former me;
Could you ever have dreamed the heart of woman
Would work so foolishly!

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• 谢野草君。Women, thou name is self-consciousness! - bm 20000910190140
• do it again: Woman, thou name is self-consciousness! - bm 20000910190400
  • better "thy name" - faultfinder 20000911003325
    • Sure, thank you. - bm 20000911111411
• 同是坛中爱醋人，相乐何必曾冤家:)) - tian xin 20000910194835
  • 谢谢甜心妙笔评论和指正。那句应为：“脸上的年轮道道都还不知在哪里！”：-) - 野草 20000911082243
• 另外，time-lines 似指时间刻下的皱纹。再谢。 - tian xin 20000910234404
• 谢野草兄妙译！戏译而与原文紧紧相扣，实在是高，不似 - XY 20000911101606

谢野草君。Women, thou name is self-consciousness!

do it again: Woman, thou name is self-consciousness!

better "thy name"

Sure, thank you.

同是坛中爱醋人，相乐何必曾冤家:))

谢谢甜心妙笔评论和指正。那句应为：“脸上的年轮道道都还不知在哪里！”：-)

另外，time-lines 似指时间刻下的皱纹。再谢。

谢野草兄妙译！戏译而与原文紧紧相扣，实在是高，不似