“梅花香自苦寒来,宝剑锋从磨砺出”如何翻译?谢谢!
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rainbow 于 1999/12/14 06:33:05 发表在 汉英
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Good honing gives a sharp edge to a sword
作者:野草 - 1999/12/14 09:45:43
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Good honing gives a sharp edge to a sword
Bitter cold adds keen fragrance to plum blossom
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Excellent!咏梅诗中最喜爱“疏影横斜水清浅,暗香浮动月黄昏”二句。
作者:tian xin - 1999/12/14 12:56:41
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试译。自己也不甚满意,望专家们修正。谢谢!
作者:tian xin - 1999/12/14 17:06:43
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Its sparse shadow leaning across water limpid and shallow
Its hidden fragrance floating under moonlight dim and yellow
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Simply wonderful as far as I'm concerned! Almost identical with the original in sentiment, rhythm and rhyme.
作者:古月 - 1999/12/14 17:20:46
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Thanks for your compliment! Not sure if it is all that wonderful for my ego, though;-)
作者:tian xin - 1999/12/14 17:42:17
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A common weakness confessed is half redressed:-)
作者:古月 - 1999/12/14 19:33:08
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A weakness shared is not despaired
作者:tian xin - 1999/12/14 22:11:59
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Thanks. Here is my improved version.
作者:野草 - 1999/12/14 21:37:35
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Thanks for your compliment. It was done in such a haste, though, that I later came up with a second version which should SOUND a lot better to the ear when read. Also I think it can better capture the soul of the original while keeping its proverbial flavour. So here it is:
“梅花香自苦寒来,宝剑锋从磨砺出”
The edge of a sword becomes keener through honing,
The fragrance of plum blossom sharpens in the bitter cold.
Thank you also for offering the other two lines. I like them. They ARE beautiful. Inspired by your delightful translation, here is my rendering:
“疏影横斜水清浅,暗香浮动月黄昏”
Their sparse shadows spread out over the water clear and shallow,
Their obscure fragrance floats around under the moon pale and yellow.
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Your translation adds a certain indefinable fragrance. Beautiful!
作者:tian xin - 1999/12/14 22:10:12
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It's Cool!
作者(Author):topgun - 2004/02/11 01:48:03
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I like it!
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我也想知道
作者(Author):惑 - 2004/03/17 03:57:16
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我正为这个伤透脑筋呢?
友人问我,真把我给难住了
查了好久就查到你的这个
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"宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来"语出何处?请教!!!
作者(Author):hh - 2004/03/08 23:42:31
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"宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来"语出何处?请教!!!
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作者(Author):akai010101 - 2004/04/04 09:42:35
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