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方壶斋 于 2000/02/23 20:47:43 发表在 汉英
大千世界无穷已； 人生岁岁有枯荣。 六道轮回何欲恋， 该撒手处无需停。 猎场兔亡当烹狗， 寒林鸟尽必藏弓。 尘埃不躲缘无物， 心在白云荡晚钟。
The world is a journey with no end
And life has ups and downs
Reincarnation being the rule
What else can't we forsake?
The hound gets cooked after the game
And the arrow burnt after the birds
In a dusty world I am but nothing
My heart tied to bells in clouds
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希望看懂其中的典故，还有想法
作者：北美 - 2000/02/24 06:41:45
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一：问题。我的问题显出无知，以前读书不求甚解的结果，请方君耐心。
“六道轮回”出自何典？
尘埃不躲缘无物(In a dusty world I am but nothing)：“缘”字如何解？
二：想法：
猎场兔亡当烹狗， 寒林鸟尽必藏弓：这两句对仗得好，意思表达得透彻严峻，读时有一股寒气。
心在白云荡晚钟：最喜欢这句。方兄/弟好境界。
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dian3 gu4
作者：Fang Hu Zhai - 2000/02/24 12:49:57
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6 dao4 lun2hui2 - do not remember clearly, referring to the Buddhist ideo of reincarnation. I remember they have a wheel indicating the different animals that you are going to become after death.
yuan2 -- because, because I am nothing. This comes from two monks dialogue. One says I should often keep myself clean. The other says I do not have to because I do not exist at all. The second monk got the essence of the Zen Buddhism. Both are famous monks whose name I do not remember now.
Dog and rabit stuff: this comes from the saying when you have captured the rabbit, you do not need your dog and you are going to cook him. When you have shot down all the birds in the forest, you do not need your arrows and bows and you are going to put them away. The story comes from pre-Qin times.
About the change downbelow:
When I wrote "sa1shou3" I mean giving up everything, even life. The whole poem's tone is a kind of "kan4po4 hong2chen2", so it is not light-hearted.
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I see. Thanks a lot.
作者：bm - 2000/02/24 15:29:45
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非常喜欢您的诗！妄动一句，可以吗？您不会当堂批我吧？:-)
作者：敬佩 - 2000/02/24 06:54:49
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大千世界无穷已，
人生岁岁有枯荣。
六道轮回何欲恋，
舍物忘我亦轻松。
猎场兔亡当烹狗，
寒林鸟尽必藏弓。
尘埃不躲缘无物，
心在白云荡晚钟。
没办法，该撒手时不撒手，不该出手却出手，挨批是挨定了！望您海涵！
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咦，只见标题不见内容。“qi1zi3dezhao4pian4”何时才能得以一展羞颜？:-)
作者：px - 2000/02/24 09:39:08
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三分过后尽开颜！:-)谢谢！
作者：px - 2000/02/24 10:09:51
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不是“三分”的问题。而是“刷新”问题。
作者：汉英 - 2000/02/24 11:25:48
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在点击“提交”后，会先出现已经输入的通知页，别管它，按页尾指示回到帖线本页，然后点击“reload”或者“refresh”，即可看到帖文。
这里需要注意的是，不要在目录主页刷新，那样只看到标题；也不要刚点完“提交”就刷新，那样会造成重帖。一定要来到内容显示页后再刷新页面，那样立即可见新帖文。总之，凡看不到内容时，记着刷新页面即可。Good luck!
汉英
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Sorry and thanks!咱是榆木脑袋，三击才能开窍:-)
作者：px - 2000/02/24 18:32:58
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给您添麻烦了！
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